Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree with these views?
It is an interesting subject of discussion as some consumer durables have been sold popularly and sellers earned high profitability is whether because of advertisements or the real demand of costumers. I am in favor of the cause of advertising as I believe that it resulted in promoting campaign and user psychology are two of the main reasons for this. However, the real needs of society are also deterministic.
In this modern world, the advertisement can be shown anytime in anyplace. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favorite singer advertises, although they do not need the products.
For example, my friend likes a celebrity and when she invented a new brand of lipstick, my friend bought a lot of those and some of them never been used. Also, when people who sit next to you have a cool and unique item, you will want it and this leads to the advertising campaign. Just like waves, it can not be stopped.
On the other hand, some individuals have enough consideration before decided to buy the product. If it really needs to make your life more comfortable and convenient and for a long time then the item should be bought. Advertising may be not a cause of customers' buying habits because individuals have their own spending habits. Especially, no one actually can fudge whether the goods sold are the real needs of society or not.
In conclusion, advertisements effect on a lot of people to buy things that unnecessary because of its power and wide range. Before buying anything, individuals should consider wisely and have enough knowledge to analyze the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
... bought a lot of those and some of them never been used. Also, when people who sit next to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, really, so, then, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96282527881 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10102245942 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3511131998 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179990970059 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643106710158 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618957427406 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097032667037 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520785175837 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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