In today’s world, people are constantly surrounded by advertising. What do you think of this trend?
In this information age, the pervasiveness of advertisements has no longer been an unusual thing and it has ingrained in people’s everyday lives. While some people advocate that they can gain several merits from advertising, others claim that it causes a barrage of problems. From my point of view; however, I am for the former idea that the advantages of advertising outweigh the disadvantages.
Admittedly, there are undeniable drawbacks of the advertisements. It is obvious that some of the posters or billboards can provide false images of the product. As the company wants to maximize the profits and gain more revenues, they tend to present their goods in the best light possible and that glorifying pictures can manipulate people into making unworthy purchases. Moreover, the advertisements not only induce people to make impulsive purchases but also mislead the consumers to the bad self-images. For example, some women may see the beautiful and perfect body of some models in fashion advertisements and aspire to that goal, which can be an unrealistic and unattainable dream. Not achieving those goals from the advertisements can cause the feeling of discontent with life.
However, there are a myriad of reasons why I believe that advertising is beneficial. The first thing to notice is that it will contribute to the economic growth of the country. As the advertisements on social media, billboards and the like can inform consumers about diverse choices, they can attract more sales and purchases. They can also spread the word about the goods faster than word of mouth, so the company can maximize the profits from timely sales. Another thing worth considering is that the public services can take advantage of the advertising. Take the advertisement about cigarettes as an example, only after it is broadcasted on television programmes can the citizens be more aware of the ramifications of smoking. As a result, people will have better accessibility in some societal activities not only including health but aloso news about politics, economics, etc. Ultimately, they will have a chance to actively engage in the betterment of society.
In conclusion, although the advertisements, to some extent, are fraught with some problems, I am convinced that they will offer people better benefits including higher economic growth, better information and awareness, and better connection to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the advertisements. It is obvious that some of the posters or billboards can provide false...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ent with life. However, there are a myriad of reasons why I believe that advertisi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, another thing, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34031413613 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07275430666 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539267015707 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9114409389 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936448796636 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327553796413 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325843365353 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065108650161 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338025250727 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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