Topic 11/5/19: Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills, such as cooperative skills. What are the causes and suggest some possible solutions?
It is a common sight that firms are concerned about their new staff’s lack of interpersonal skills. While some reasons for this phenomenon can be identified, probable solutions can also be adopted by companies.
The fact that new employees have not mastered many skills from communication to collaboration can be attributed to both their education and family backgrounds. First of all, at schools, youngsters are only encouraged to achieve individual academic success, instead of having social skills and being team-players. Besides, this trend is accentuated by ambitious and traditional parents, particularly in Asian households, where children are heavily imposed on hierarchical management. As a result, these young adults fail to realize the importance of sharing and working in harmony with others in groups.
However, there might be some effective measures to combat this issue which corporations can take. Firstly, enterprises should dedicate their funding towards training sessions and workshops to hone their staff’s skills. For example, this can be done through bonding activities in which employees are required to work together to reach a common goal. Furthermore, recruiters should make cooperative skills as one of their prerequisites for employment. Correspondingly, job seekers would focus on cultivating their social skill sets rather than their academic accomplishments.
To conclude, though I agree that many newly recruited staff have not aced interpersonal skills, there are solutions for companies to effectively mitigate this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8347826087 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17479439818 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686956521739 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0327563183 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19061218522 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686514916534 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480193938718 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109638987466 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425026511979 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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