Topic: People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the era of modern society, living conditions have been heightened in every aspect of life, providing cutting-edge products and services for humans. Yet there are several arguments concerning the life quality of people compared to the past. From my point of view, I totally see eye to eye with this notion and this essay will shed light on more details.
One major ground behind the mentioned claim is that there are numerous breakthroughs in healthcare. In fact, diseases and infections are some of the top causes leading to decreased human life expectancy, or even immature deaths. Thanks to the unprecedented progress in healthcare, today, a variety of serious diseases have been diagnosed soon and cured suitably, such as fever and preventive vaccines. In addition, medical advances enable doctors to give more concise diagnoses through medical imaging or endoscopic. For instance, laser is one of the most effective treatments for complicated cases.
Furthermore, the digital revolution has fundamentally transformed our daily lives, marking a significant improvement over past centuries. With the support of the Internet and portable devices, today, individuals are likely to get instant access to a wealth of information and myriad sources of entertainment. Therefore, geographic distance obstacles will be done away with barriers, fostering global citizens to communicate with each other. Additionally, these technological advances enable us to optimize the efficiency of work performance as well as convenience such as internet banking, e-wallet, and e-commerce platforms, allowing consumers to purchase online. As a result, these improvements enhance considerably the living standards.
In conclusion, the 21st century offers a superior quality of life, primarily thanks to groundbreaking advancements in healthcare and the transformative impact of digital technology. These developments have not only prolonged our life spans but also enriched our daily experiences, making modern life more convenient, connected, and comfortable than ever before.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e. In fact, diseases and infections are some of the top causes leading to decreased human l...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79344262295 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19300498567 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.145595147 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13390816808 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387476095697 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530113320179 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081818968744 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681274174596 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e. In fact, diseases and infections are some of the top causes leading to decreased human l...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79344262295 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19300498567 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.145595147 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13390816808 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387476095697 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530113320179 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081818968744 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681274174596 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.