Topic: Many people are working longer and longer hours. What are the reasons and
Effects?
In order to keep pace with the latest technology in modern society, a number of people have to work longer hours. In fact, in urban areas, this lifestyle has become a tendency nowadays. This essay will shed light on the detailed reasons behind this trend as well as potential solutions to tackle this issue.
One significant ground behind this current trend is that today, co-workers have been put under an enormous pressure. In fact, in spite of a variety of available jobs in metropolitan areas, people still confront many challenges in the competitive labour market so as to get a promising job. Unless they get a well-paid job after graduating, they would be criticized and underestimated by other people, even their beloved ones. As a result, they might be suffered from peer pressure, which leads to working long hours to land a sufficient career. In addition, obviously, the demand for working extra hours often stems from increasing demand in the workplace. With the aim of catching up with the competition in an increasingly globalized market, employees have to take charge of multitasking or a ton of workload, however, it is often a lack of proficient employees. Consequently, workers have to work additional hours to compensate, which is exemplified clearly in IT-related sectors. According to a recent study, a Vietnam program developer frequently devotes an average of 10 hours per day to integrating complicated software systems.
Actions should be taken into consideration as soon as possible to minimize the problem and enhance the quality of life as well. Extra office hours can have an adverse effect on both workers’ health and their personal life. First of all, working longer hours are likely to undergo insufficient rest, a decrease in energy, and eventually health conditions in extreme cases. This is illustrated in research conducted in Japanese white-collar workers, who have to stay in their offices for approximately 14 hours, resulting in spinal injuries, arthritis, and increased risk of strokes. Furthermore, as more time is spent at work, co-workers definitely do not have enough time to enjoy a great time with their loved ones, which may be an external factor weakening bonds between family members and friends. As a result, this can generate a feeling of general dissatisfaction and probably gradual dispart from each other. People who are suffering in the long run, they are prone to stress and depression seriously.
In conclusion, extended working hours are associated with increasing demands in the workplace as well as external strains, preventing employees from leading a healthy and adopting a balanced life. Therefore, I believe governments should enact laws that impose weekly overtime standards for corporations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...lenges in the competitive labour market so as to get a promising job. Unless they get a ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28117913832 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95834863675 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 176.041082164 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614512471655 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2563934439 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.45 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.05 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177595260982 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491363843382 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558794467346 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993779316185 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267272490308 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 78.4519038076 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.