as well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
it is undeniable that the main concern of enterprises is making money, but whether they should also be responsible for social duties still remain as the most challenging issue. this essay will analyze this issue and focus on supporting the problem.
Firstly, the growth of a company can lead to tremendous social benefits. The more profits a company gains the more revenue taxes it will have to pay and so by making use the most of this benefit, the government will be able to enhance citizens' living conditions as well as support society's improvement as a whole. For instance, provide modern facilities in order to maximize students' opportunities to practice what they had learned, and educate them to become qualified-workers and good citizens.
Secondly, it is essential to the government to make cutbacks for unemployment and because of that businesses are potential sources to deal with the problem. companies can support citizens by giving more jobs as well as organize seasonal training programs since the demand of the job market is becoming more strict and require qualified workers. For instance, when the citizen is able to earn a living, it can eliminate his or her worries about poverty, especially in the era of the 4.0 Industry, more social skills are in need to catch up with the global development.
As such it can be concluded that the main forces of a company are making profits but it must also take social responsibilities into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00409836066 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86490067403 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5677764336 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154221827123 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616777152011 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498699893003 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990409625088 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219887360349 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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