As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that businesses have social responsibilities while they making money.The essay will discuss two side of this opinion.
We can’t negate that profit is the most important thing in running businesses.If companies unable to pay the bills or pay its employees, the company would not be able to survive in this competitive world.At the same time,low revenue,growing a business is almost impossible. As a result,good donating for society is unsuitable.In other words, making profit is the first step of give back to society.
However,businesses should not only focus for earning money.They should contribute to society.For example: making charity,education project,environment idea.Besides , they can pay taxes regularly and on time,provide good fringe benefits for employees like Health Insurance ,free dinner or pay for injuries experienced by workers in the workplace.By contributing for society,business can advanced imaging in front of general public .From that get a competitive advantage over all their competitors.
In my opinion,business and companies should contribute to society.If they do that,they not only develop their imaging,competitive advantage but also help country become civilization,development.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rity,education project,environment idea.Besides , they can pay taxes regularly and on t...
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...they can pay taxes regularly and on time,provide good fringe benefits for employees like...
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...fits for employees like Health Insurance ,free dinner or pay for injuries experien...
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Suggestion: By
...experienced by workers in the workplace.By contributing for society,business can a...
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...he workplace.By contributing for society,business can advanced imaging in front of genera...
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...siness can advanced imaging in front of general public .From that get a competitive advantage ...
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...r all their competitors. In my opinion,business and companies should contribute to soci...
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Suggestion: , they
...ld contribute to society.If they do that,they not only develop their imaging,competit...
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Suggestion: , competitive
...that,they not only develop their imaging,competitive advantage but also help country become ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , development
...ut also help country become civilization,development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03409090909 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05724463158 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.240082208 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.4 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.2 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141204167375 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849359198807 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071720503328 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10126195169 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715475261164 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.0946893788 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 10.57 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.29 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...esponsibilities while they making money.The essay will discuss two side of this opi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...t important thing in running businesses.If companies unable to pay the bills or pa...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...le to survive in this competitive world.At the same time,low revenue,growing a bus...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , low
... this competitive world.At the same time,low revenue,growing a business is almost im...
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Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , growing
...itive world.At the same time,low revenue,growing a business is almost impossible. As a r...
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Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , good
...siness is almost impossible. As a result,good donating for society is unsuitable.In o...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...good donating for society is unsuitable.In other words, making profit is the first...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , businesses
...t step of give back to society. However,businesses should not only focus for earning money...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...should not only focus for earning money.They should contribute to society.For exampl...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...money.They should contribute to society.For example: making charity,education proje...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , education
...e to society.For example: making charity,education project,environment idea.Besides , they...
^^^^^^^^^^
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , environment
...xample: making charity,education project,environment idea.Besides , they can pay taxes regul...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...rity,education project,environment idea.Besides , they can pay taxes regularly and on t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ucation project,environment idea.Besides , they can pay taxes regularly and on tim...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , provide
...they can pay taxes regularly and on time,provide good fringe benefits for employees like...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fits for employees like Health Insurance ,free dinner or pay for injuries experien...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...experienced by workers in the workplace.By contributing for society,business can a...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , business
...he workplace.By contributing for society,business can advanced imaging in front of genera...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...siness can advanced imaging in front of general public .From that get a competitive advantage ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...anced imaging in front of general public .From that get a competitive advantage ov...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
...ced imaging in front of general public .From that get a competitive advantage over a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , business
...r all their competitors. In my opinion,business and companies should contribute to soci...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... companies should contribute to society.If they do that,they not only develop thei...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ld contribute to society.If they do that,they not only develop their imaging,competit...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , competitive
...that,they not only develop their imaging,competitive advantage but also help country become ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , development
...ut also help country become civilization,development.
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03409090909 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05724463158 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.240082208 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.4 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.2 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141204167375 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849359198807 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071720503328 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10126195169 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715475261164 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.0946893788 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 10.57 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.29 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.