As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As well as generating profits, multinational cmpanies also have social obligations. From my personal pespective, I am inclined to the idea that enterprises have social responsibilities along with earning money.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that the top priority of almost companies is making money. Because when firms focus on generating profits,which will expand the production and make more job opportunities for citizens and not trigger mass unemployment. take, for example, some companies in vietnam have created jobs for many Vietnamese. Another justification is that businesses make more money, people will have more taxes to pay. Therefore, that income would be spent for many important industries.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the responsibility of earning money, I am of the opinion that there are several compelling reasons as to why these enterprises must also have social obligations which cannt be dispensed with. Firstly, during manufacturing, many factories release exhaust into the environment, which results in environmental problems. As a result, multinational companies have to take immediate actions in order not to incur serious consequences in the future. Furthermore, companies are responsible for helping people who are in need, specially the disabled through charity, which will earn the public’s trust and good for the whole society and that firms as well. For instance, the increasing in the number of businesses do a host of work for charity may promote their brand reputation in non-commercial ways and foster a lasting relationship with buyers.
In conclusion, despite undeniable responsibilities of making money, I am convinced that social obligations still has an important role to play in modern society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59925093633 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30359159156 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610486891386 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2224752629 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253782085748 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912031752862 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701206518563 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170062691975 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525449180521 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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