As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
companies have always sought to make a profit, while some people think that businesses also have social obligations. Personally, I completely agree with the idea that businesses should contribute to society than only earn money.
On the one hand, I accept that companies need to make a profit to survive in a cut-throat competition in these industries these days. it is essential for companies to cover their running costs such as employees’ wages, payments for buildings, facilities. Furthermore, there is a need to enhance the innovation and development of companies, which is to maintain their success. Bolstering workers’ skills or recruiting graduates who are able to cope with demanding jobs and challenge work, which is to satisfy the orders of customers. if a business is unable to pay its bill, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. businesses can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
On the other hand, companies should not sole focus on maximizing profit, they have an important role play on society. Fair employee remuneration is necessary for any company. one obligation that managers and leaders have is to treat worker well rather than exploit them. For example, they could pay a living wage for them to have a good quality of life. In addition, establishing social welfare is a good idea because they can support local charities, environmental projects, and education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to reduce tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses will be happy when they contribute to society through the tax system.
In conclusion, I believe that social obligation should be placed as much important as financial objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35125448029 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09134746206 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0130342055 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190901230412 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596589790801 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707279043845 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12720274543 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105296339726 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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