While people consider global warming. Discuss both views
In recent decade, the question of global warming or deforestation has more significant impacts on our environmental degradation has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although deforestation has contributed the severe devastation to our planet, people should spend more time to alleviate global warming related issues.
There are many consequences caused by deforestation. First, since trees have been cut down at a alarming rate due to timber smuggling, the erosion has been more and more serious. In fact, floods and typhoons sweep thousands of houses and kill hundreds of lives every year, which requires us to have effective solutions. Second, the air contamination results in problems related to human’s health. For example, a recent statistic indicated that the number of people who had respiratory diseases and lung cancers have been increasing considerably, therefore solving these problems is necessary.
On the other hand, global warming have unprecedented impacts that should be taken into consideration. First, due to the change in weather in recent time, some animals are likely to stand on the verge of extinction. For instance, in Northern Pole, wide animals cannot adapt the fast shift of temperature, they tend to immigrate to further areas to live, which is tough for them to exist. Second, since global warming intensify natural disasters, the living condition of human beings is threatened. It means people are coping with a boiling hot temperature or an extremely cold, thus shortening human’s life expectancy.
In conclusion, most negative impacts related to the current environmental deterioration have been attributed to the global warming. By considering some strict laws and raising citizens’ awareness about environmental protection, government can help to address these alarming global problems.
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The bar chart belw shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. 73
- Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons such as traditional medicine.How could this be solved. 67
- Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there 68
- The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...irst, since trees have been cut down at a alarming rate due to timber smuggling, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68458781362 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11846907511 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637992831541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9105418541 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118619726951 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382735057891 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383417456381 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769806019821 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427627130809 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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