wild animal
A variety of citizens think that wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. However, I hold the opposite idea that wild animals still play an essential role in modern life and they need to be protected in their natural habitat.
There is no doubt that wild animals the life of wild animals has many benefits. The number of wild animals is huge and they are distributed almost everywhere in the world, even in extreme climates where humans can’t live, creating the biodiversity of the earth . Polar bears, for example, live in the ice mountains of the arctic, while the whales can dive deep into the ocean floor. Besides, some animals are also used for industries, such as weasel coffee.
It cannot be denied that each animal is an important link to keep the ecosystem balance, and the extinction of one species will have consequences for others species. For instance, if herbivores disappear, carnivores will lose their food source and lead to the collapse of the food chain. However, human activities are causing animals to lose their habitat, and uncontrolled hunting activities are causing some animals to gradually disappear from life. In other words, protecting the wild animals also means that we are trying to protect our lives.
All in all, the planet is shared by all the species and as the most intelligent species, as we claim ourselves to be, we need to have rather great responsibilities to protect wild animals.
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century so protecting them is a waste of resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- wild animal 78
- environtment 11
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- education 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89243027888 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62184794977 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3002492278 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.636363636 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462874006178 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196679002538 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177051490725 0.0667982634062 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27748910703 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13059231005 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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