Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this era of modern technology, the society is a fond of the internet as it possible to do nearly everything in the internet. Through the media platform, it is possible to express yourself, study, or even shop online, and it is convenient to do so.
When talking about online shopping, there are a ton of advantages and disadvantages. It is certain that the online shopping can generate time efficiency and convenience. People do not have to go out of their house and go somewhere just to pick up a few things. All they have to do is just go on their phone, browse what they want, and check out online. Online shopping provides low cost products with excellent qualities, and also various discounts. Due to the transaction that occurs online, the seller are not obligated to have a physical store, they can just do business at home. Therefore, there are a lot of ways to press down the price.
However, there are also different kind of disadvantages in online shopping which resulted in people who prefer shop offline. It is not possible to see and feel the actual product when shopping online. Hence, many customers receive products that are not as their expectations. The convenience of online shopping also leads to laziness as people are so comfortable doing everything online, they tend to stay at home and relax in their beds. These kind of activities when done for a long period of time, can lead to severe laziness and obesity. Many also thought that shopping online does not create the fun atmosphere of shopping.
Even though online shopping has its disadvantages, but the advantages outweighs it as doing things online can help people live their lives easier and lessen their burdens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...o stay at home and relax in their beds. These kind of activities when done for a long peri...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...kind of activities when done for a long period of time, can lead to severe laziness and obesit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, kind of, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84589041096 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68932013081 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537671232877 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8209927444 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120800016404 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426889957694 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280075299505 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841575513859 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163173580752 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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