Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Online shopping, Now a days online shopping is on a boom as most of the people prefer buying things online.
Tough, there are advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. I think that advantages of online shopping outweight the disadvantages, the reasons are, shopping from the convinience of home, vast variety to compare, grab the best deal etc.
Firstly, what more anyone want if they get to buy groceries or book travel teckets or buy any other thing sitting at home avoiding travell time, fuel cost, pollution etc and the things get delivered at dooestep.
Moreover, you get to compare with multiple sellers and choose the best deal which best suits your requirement. For example, if you are buying a mobile phone, you can filter you search according tro your budget, specifications etc. Once results are displayed according to your filters you have a clear options to choose from. Even you can also filter the dealers who are offering more discount on the mobile phone.
Not only electronics or gadgets, you get the choice of comparing, filtering, sorting your preferences in groceries, vegetables and even meat and sea food aswell.
Tough, there are few drawbacks of online shopping like one cannot physically examin the things before buying but few online sellers gives option of return and exchange if the buyer is not satisfied with his purchase, yes it is a time consuming process.
Hence, now a days online shopping is the considered to be the best and convinient option for most of the people in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Online shopping, Now a days online shopping is on a boom as most of...
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Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Online shopping, Now a days online shopping is on a boom as most of...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... deal etc. Firstly, what more anyone want if they get to buy groceries or book tr...
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Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... is a time consuming process. Hence, now a days online shopping is the considered to be...
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Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...a time consuming process. Hence, now a days online shopping is the considered to be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0234375 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63297477245 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2854408742 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.909090909 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166396349084 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625305155832 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034282596631 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752105781989 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371551389847 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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