Write about the following topic:
In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A fact that seems to be tangible within the contemporary era is starvation and hunger despite improvements in terms of agriculture. Although the number die of people who die due to hunger has deteriorated, this issue should strongly be taken into consideration. Mismanagement a serious problem that is a fundamental factor causing this situation and in order to take the situation under control qualified people should accept governmental responsibilities and additionally nutrition is needed to be fairly exported to poor neighborhoods. This essay will get both sides illustrated.
First, by inappropriate management in economic policies and food distribution local people are seriously influenced. To illustrate, nowadays money speaks first and clearly on the basis of monetary power, the life standards are determined. In some poor world spots, lack of income is a reason that would make food distribution to this region decreased. Additionally, allocating a budget to provide nutritious food is another causing factor. An example for such circumstance is Africa; a territory that despite its valuable sources, it just goes through a demanding situation in terms of food shortage and consequently an eye-catching number of locals do suffer from poverty and starvation. To sum up, mis management is a prominent challenge in many provinces making people dissatisfied in various aspect including food shortage.
Alternatively, the solutions are clandestine within the depth of problem and they are eradicating poverty and fairly distribution to poor neighborhoods. If poverty get eradicated, no more issues will be seen in terms of food shortage thus helping financially to devastated countries is the key to success. Distributing food and exporting primary ingredients can be extraordinary fruitful that gradually result in fairly distribution. For instance, for a long consecutive period Iran's government took people in Bam region taken care of due to the earthquake hitting the area. If these locals were asked some few questions, they would opine that governmental help and food imports prevent starvation and dedicating adequate finance to this action was reaping the benefits. Therefore, poverty elimination and fair import and export in terms of nutrition are two main solutions by which the problem could be solved.
All in all, a sensible problem that is sensed and seen around the world is hunger although the amelioration in life quality. Moreover, the only reason prompting to this problematic situation is mismanagement What can stop this process and lead to happier life is strong financial regulations and fair food distribution. These nations were discussed in the written essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56900726392 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23310473821 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56416464891 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6198015717 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.052631579 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156091467301 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452179739175 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323990072482 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997374721566 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202384168615 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.