The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise.
To what extent do you agree?
A learned person once quoted ‘Health is wealth’, which stays true to this day. Often, inculcating physical activities in daily routine is furnished as the most important aspect for better health. Though this claim cannot be denied completely, but considering exercise only as the prime reason for good health seems a moot point.
New age life demands one to spend long hours sitting in front of their screens, be it for school projects or for work, which hinders their health. Dedicating time to work out regularly undoubtedly will have a very positive influence on ones body. For instance, athletes and sportsperson who are the role models of fit body have made exercise part of their everyday routine, which help them to build strength and keep them focused. Making physical activity part of ones lifestyle is the need of the hour in the current mechanical world.
However, along with following a strong fitness regime having a balanced and nutritious diet also needs to be prioritized. The right amount of all the nutrients makes up for a balanced diet. Health experts are of the opinion that ones food habit contributes 80% in having a healthy body. To support this point, there is a phrase ‘Bodies are made in the kitchen’, meaning what you eat, contributes maximum in having a fitter body.
Scientific research has also proved that a person can achieve good health with clean eating habits supported by exercise, but when the exercise is not supported by the correct food plan, it is impossible to achieve the required health goals. Thereby, though the importance of exercise cannot be ignored, but to reap the benefits out of the same it need to be catalyzed with the good food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02797202797 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6657692122 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7563182251 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0757005440599 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266040714186 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242541689444 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467367278284 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114503394108 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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