Both poor and rich find accessibility to University education difficult to what extent do you agree or disagree
Getting into a University has never been an easy task for the students it is not only difficult for the learners who belong to impoverished section of society but also for those who come from well the and elite group however in my opinion while it has been tough for the poor students due to this financial constraints it is more less easier for the written students considering the amount of resources they have at their disposal
Taking admission in graduate and postgraduate programs for the socially deprived students has always been tough this is because of low income which can not support the cost requirement of a professional degree. Another thing is the rigid and tough entrance criteria of these institutes which works as a big hindrance for those who to seek to take admission in these places. It is Mainly because admission in most of the courses are subject to an entrance test for which expensive coaching and private classes are required which possibly they cannot AC wire due to their low economic status
On the other hand the things are far simpler for those who have sound financial background they cannot easily afford to pay exorbitant University fees but also they manage to get extra paid classes to improve their overall performance recently department of education in India has conducted a research covering total 22 Universities and top colleges and results are striking which consist more than 70% student those who come from rich families this make thing quite clear that proceeding higher qualification in universities is not less than a dream for the poverty stricken
In conclusion this essay has argued how seeking admission in universities is hard for Poor students whereas with good income families can send their children to universities very easily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'less' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: less
...due to this financial constraints it is more less easier for the written students conside...
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Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less easy'?
Suggestion: less easy
...o this financial constraints it is more less easier for the written students considering th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, another thing, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03020134228 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64252529934 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 99.0 20.2975951904 488% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 336.862319386 49.4020404114 682% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 499.666666667 106.682146367 468% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 99.3333333333 20.7667163134 478% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.3333333333 7.06120827912 529% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0707159282068 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414466210763 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355286188521 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528885858223 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339188161979 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.9 13.0946893788 396% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -29.01 50.2224549098 -58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.9 11.3001002004 371% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.08 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.57 8.58950901804 146% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.6 10.1190380762 411% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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