Completing university education is thought by some to be best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the contemporary era, every person is determined to their success and secured future and to fulfil those dreams it is indispensable to take some steps which can be different to different people. Some proposed that to get a better job it is compulsory to complete a university education and on the contrary, some suggests getting experience and developing soft skill is far important than anything. Which makes this conundrum topic mootable.
It is predominant fact that now a days giant multi-national companies prefer university degrees more than anything and even those qualification must be from some reputed colleges and universities. That is the main reason why, myriads of young age group following the same pattern to get lavish jobs in big companies. Is it really matters to have a university degree to get a well established job profile in reputed big firm? well there is study which provides staggering scenario of today's youth. One study executed by one of the big educational institute that reveals, big multi-national companies have conditional eligibility criteria that needs to be fulfilled if anyone want to get a job in the company, and that conditions is university education and that particular qualification from reputed university with good grades.
On the other side of the part, it is irrefutable to say that all successful entrepreneurs have degrees from reputed colleges. Most of the billionaires does not even graduated for instance, Bill gates, Jeff bezos Steve jobs, Christiano Ronaldo. Further, they are famous not because they have university degrees, reason behind their success is their experience and hard work that develops skills which is inevitable in modern world and somehow they make them-self savvy in their field and fathom into their required skills.
According to my opinion, it is great if one has appropriate educational qualification because in later term of life whether one person will become successful he/she needs some level of education for better communication and execution of policies in the organisation to stay ahead. Simultaneously, experience also plays vital role in every step of life.
To curtail the long story short, education is indispensable for securing better future. However, no one can also beat the inevitable experience that proves out of the box thinking. So, both things with proper mixture can proves catastrophic outcomes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ootable. It is predominant fact that now a days giant multi-national companies prefer u...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this qualification' or 'those qualifications'?
Suggestion: this qualification; those qualifications
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Well
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Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ia that needs to be fulfilled if anyone want to get a job in the company, and that c...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'graduate'
Suggestion: graduate
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'prove'
Suggestion: prove
...So, both things with proper mixture can proves catastrophic outcomes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, well, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00247553913 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.8389789174 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251231440725 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690914736551 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851676995829 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118417597038 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732343736544 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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