Computer Technology is ie getting cheaper and so it is likely that adults will be working from home and children will study from home.
Is it a positive or negative development?
As compared to the past decade, technology has drastically revolutionized our lifestyle. In running days, computer inventions are easy to access in terms of cost, in is expected that people will opt-in to work from home; similarly, kids will adapt online studies. I consider this approach a positive development. I shall elaborate my my stance with valid arguments and examples in the following paragraphs.
Predominantly, one of the most evident benefit of home based studies and working is cost and time optimization. With the comfort of computer at home, students can take online classes and employees can enjoy home based working. This approach will save time consumed for going to the office or university as well as fuel cost. For example, I have to travel 35 km per side to go to my office that takes around 45 minutes to reach and good amount of fuel everyday.
To elucidate my stance further, by adapting this approach, people can benefit from distant learning & can enroll in many courses and certifications which are not available in their country. Similarly, people people who wants to earn extra money can do online jobs from home with the ease of laptop and cheap wifi. I would like to quote my personal example here, I did my Masters through an online University provides distant learning opportunity in parallel to my job.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I strongly believe that by utilizing computer technology at home for job and study has enormous advantages and is quite a progressive approach to adapt. Using technology to bring ease in life and maintaining work life balance is a positive phenomenon. In the future, people will tend to prefer online working and studies as compared to conventional ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88233424852 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7561814518 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243437276154 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822608869153 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669817933404 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157725443129 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553419817919 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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