Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Recently, without any qualm it is accepted that countries around the world are facing many problems such as pollution, population, and literacy, my country is not an exception. This essay will discuss problems that my country may face in the future along with some of the merits that are needed to be accounted for.
Firstly, India is the second largest country in terms of population. To fulfill the need of all citizen to commute for their work, to attend the social function and outreach the medical emergencies large transportation system is needed. This system will induce a huge amount of carbon dioxide in the air which will be resulting in air pollution. This air pollution may create may cardiovascular diseases or breathing illness among the residents. For instance, In Dehli, the capital of India, Air quality was extremely poor during the winters, so that government had enforced holidays in schools and colleges to protect the youth of the nation. In the future, this will get worse. However, it can be prevented in the future if the government force citizens to opt for the public transport system instead of personal vehicles which will reduce air pollution.
Secondly, The low level of literacy among the people plays a vital role in decreasing the growth of the nation. In today's cut-throat competition, it is necessary for a country to have well equipped and skilled labor to promote industrialization in order to have a self-sustained economy for the holistic growth of the nation. This can be achieved if the government should allocate a sufficient amount of budget to educational institutes to empower the working task force of the nation. For instance, Japan, USA, and the UK are investing more amount to have the best educational system and they are well ahead of in terms of development.
To conclude, pollution, population and literacy are major problems that our world is facing, and if certain majors are not taken to overcome these problems the situation will get worse. despite this, these problems can be overcome if suggested merits are well enforced by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0632183908 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80993344896 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7481509621 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299875053411 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971936287218 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776291783157 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19799221571 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858906475226 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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