Globalization has many positive effects on world's economy but the negative effects cannot be forgotten.
What is your point of view about this topic?
Myriad of affirmative impacts could be seen on the economy of globe due to globalization; however, some school of thoughts deem that deleterious implications cannot be neglected. While local economy affects due to this development, I believe that perquisites in terms of availability of jobs at cheaper rate cannot be avoided.
On the one hand, world has become a global village due to globalization. Owing to this, smaller businesses have to face plight to sell their products in local market because different items are available in the market at lower rate which are imported from other countries. Consequently, less preference is given to the local sellers which is perilous for the local economy. For example, in India, bearing manufacturing industries are in jeopardy because China is supplying the same product at cheaper rate. However, I believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks of globalization.
On the other hand, a huge number of employment is provided to developing countries because of globalization. That is to say that many multi-national companies are establishing their manufacturing units in developing nations due to which unemployed people could easily fond a suitable job. Moreover, it will not only advantageous to the people of guest countries, but organizations are also benefited by recruiting employees at lower wages as compared to their native nations. To exemplify, Apple has built a manufacturing plant in India and gives job opportunities to thousands of people. In addition to that, Indians are working at lower annual package than Americans. Therefore, I believe that globalization has more positive implications on the world's economy.
In conclusion, it can be reiterated that though, local shop-keepers and businesses are facing difficulty to sell their products, I believe that better job opportunities as well as workers at cheaper rate are more productive. Furthermore, it is recommended that rules and regulations should be made by states to conserve the local businesses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45396825397 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25748010259 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0169709313 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.533333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999552713838 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362682220182 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468608770082 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666056153063 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454082625272 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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