It is often said that government spends too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important. Do you agree or disagree?
In the past, government spending was assumed to be almost perfect and never a concern to the populace. However, these days, it is the popular opinions that a huge portion of the nation’s budget is used to curb and control wildfires. People believe that this money would be better spent on plans aimed at other issues facing the nation. I completely agree with this point of view.
Wildfire is a rising concern due to global warming and other climatic condition of certain regions. Preventing such natural disasters and protecting the people is one of the nation's prime responsibility. Having said that, a country and its government are responsible for a plethora of other duties including effective use its budget.
Governments all around the world have a duty to its citizens to spend the money accrued through taxes economically and effectively. Focusing primarily on one project such a wildfire is detrimental to the country's economy and well-being as a whole.
Many developed countries across the globe spend mainly on certain aspects of society as they can sustain to do so.
However, developing and under-developed nations need to be vigilant and frugal with their budget. For example, developed nations such as America focus their spending primarily on defense-related projects whereas countries such as India need to concentrate on building a self-sustained country.
In conclusion, the government should absolutely take preventive and corrective measures for disasters such as wildfires. However, the government should formulate methodologies and place safeguards to ensure that the country's budget is not affected by such acts of god.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42084942085 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0472641233 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1575363307 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139986017285 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047537975986 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027994066549 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712990215221 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026024949664 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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