Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Illustrators and other creative individuals require liberty to be able to produce amazing pieces of work. Some part of the population is of the belief that they should have complete power to express their individuality through their art. I completely agree with this school of thought.
Artists challenge the rules in their sector by picking inspiration from every aspect of the world leading to mesmerizing artistic breakthroughs. This has the potential to have a trickle-down effect on other sectors of society. For example, technology creators are heavily influenced by the arts to produce eye-catching and addictive softwares, applications and websites.
An artist’s ingenuity and their freedom to express it boost creativity among the youth of the region. It shapes culture and addresses the difficult topics in society that are too sensitive to touch at that time. For instance, the birth and growth of the American rap community in the 1950's and the accompanying artworks have constantly challenged society's definition of justice and equality. The interesting approach to expressing their ideas to society has bred new generations of rappers who continually push the art form's boundaries and capabilities.
Artists have a unique responsibility to appeal to the senses and in-turn inspire thoughts and ideas. Therefore, the arts must be given complete freedom to explore their creativity. However, every field of society is allowed and encouraged to push further with the exception of the arts. This is highly unfair and it absolutely must change.
In conclusion, I believe an artist should be given complete freedom as they are the new-age thinkers and philosophers who improve the standards and norms of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...genuity and their freedom to express it boost creativity among the youth of the regio...
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Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
... allowed and encouraged to push further with the exception of the arts. This is highly unfair and it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46840148699 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02568890137 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4347065381 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235350193348 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727162031141 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693285269918 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124466767488 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210891600454 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.