In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
Most of the nations are now banning smokers to smoke in parks, restaurants, hospitals, museums, and libraries. This essay completely agrees with this idea because smoking in public areas affects the health of non-smokers besides resulting in the decline of the tourism industry.
The primary reason smoking is ban in public vicinity is that smoke from cigarettes affects not only the smoker himself but also the passive smokers. This possesses a devastating threat to passers-by; an infant, pregnant women or an elderly resulting in a plethora of respiratory disorders and heart diseases and in rare cases deaths due to harmful smoke from tobacco. Hence, the health of non-smokers is safe when in public. For example, according to WHO, after Germany have declared to quit smoking in health centers, amusement parks, and restaurants the lung conditions of 50%-60% of non-smokers were improved and they claimed that they could respire in fresh smoke-free-air.
Another main reason is the smokers spoil the air in tourist hotspots; the natural atmosphere of these places gets worsened-up with the harmful smoke. To explain, tourists, play a big role in the development of a nation, they visit for gearing-up their mood and get rid of the daily humdrum of life. When they find the parks and historical places full of tobacco smoke and fumes, they would stop traveling to these soul-consoling locations eventually hindering the growth of the tourism industry of that nation. Hyderabad, for instance, has many artistic monuments and breath-taking spots, the government has declared to quit smoking in these places consequently resulted in an alarming rise of tourists of about 50%.
In conclusion, public smoking is prohibited in various states so that not only public health is ensured from cigarette smoke but also this initiative endeavors in the development of the tourism sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33444816054 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83640435254 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0066267493 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144170630684 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605847923181 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040659933696 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968219897876 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255821128313 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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