Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The world’s standards have changed dynamically around the world in the last few decades. Certain demographics hold the statement that governments should take initiatives in all different developments of the society instead of, only focusing on the economy of the country. I personally believe that it is equally essential to pay attention to all aspects of social progress as they are strongly dependent on each other.
Undoubtedly, the economy of the country is an imperative indicator of growth and development. Progress and sustainability of many sectors rely on the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of the country. As a result, governments find it crucial to give special attention to the growth of the economy. World Bank, for instance, issues an index every year regarding the possible impacts on the economy of the world as it would define that how other sectors will perform during the year.
Conversely, other sectors are also equally paramount for human development and good governance in the country. The prosperity of the country is directly proportionate with the proper functionality of all the sectors and departments as they exclusively support the country. Subsequently, it helps the government to deal with many inevitable challenges. A rather illustrative example is America. They have the most powerful economy in the world but they are lacking in their medical and social security system which is lagging them behind.
I am of the opinion that government should pay enough attention to all challenges of the country as it would help to get the better pace of overall progress as many developed European countries like Finland and Iceland have set the example for the rest of the world.
The conclusion to be drawn is that many governments consider the economy-oriented achievements of the country as overall success; however, they should not overlook other sectors as they also contribute a lot to the prosperity of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, look, regarding, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25559105431 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00633715022 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517571884984 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5611526062 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163081883439 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570264832823 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412703363433 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971202565868 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263547456081 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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