Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays communication around the world is changed a lot, due to this the olden day's practices like letter writing and postcards are transmitted to emails, what’sapp, and video calls. According to me, I completely agree with the argument and in this essay, I am going to discuss the modern methods are more overweight than traditional communication methods.
However, communications these days are more faster and efficient. In the olden days, people write letters which took a very long time to reach the people. The innovation of smartphones made it easy by using thousands of mobile apps such as what’s app, vibes, skype, google talk so on. The person who stays far from family can connect by using these apps even they can see the person in a video call and can communicate. Hence the letters lose their significance because of these inventions. Currently, I am staying in another country but I can in touch with my friends and parents by using the skype video call.
Furthermore, the letters not only carry the news but love and emotions. People love to read the same letters many times to feel all the emotions attached. Still, I remember when I was in 7th class one of my friends moved to other places she wrote me a letter still I keep that letter with me as a memory. Whenever I saw the letter I feel very happy and have a glance of my school days
Altogether, I want to conclude that those days letters are one of the main sources for communication but new technology overcome this by helping people to communicate quickly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... to emails, what’sapp, and video calls. According to me, I completely agree with the argument ...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...’sapp, and video calls. According to me, I completely agree with the argument and...
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Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
... However, communications these days are more faster and efficient. In the olden days, peopl...
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Line 2, column 420, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...on in a video call and can communicate. Hence the letters lose their significance bec...
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Line 2, column 537, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tly, I am staying in another country but I can in touch with my friends and paren...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a glance of my school days Altogether, I want to conclude that those days lette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75092936803 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70741735982 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.401752379 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148690691526 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511904387732 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333631007282 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969107794932 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381022367612 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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