In most successful organisations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, while other people said that other factors
are more significant. What is your opinion?
Many factors contribute to the success of a business. While some people think transparent communication between managers and employees is of the essence, I believe that job satisfaction is more important for an organization to be profitable.
People think effective communication between employers and employees drives working success for two reasons. First, good interpersonal communication skills are necessary tools for managers to help employees do their jobs successfully. Managers should use verbal or written skills appropriately to assign tasks and give directions so that employees can quickly perform their tasks and achieve business goals. Second, managers, who maintain professionalism, open workplace communication are more likely to be seen as approachable by their employees. This makes employees more confident to contribute their ideas to business development and speak up internal conflicts. The businesses, therefore, are successful because of the open workplace culture and high productivity.
However, I would argue that job satisfaction is the most important thing for a successful workplace environment. Keeping workers happy would minimize the turnover rates, which helps companies to save their budgets for training and recruitment. When employees decide to stay with the business, they also build their trust and loyalty to it. This good relationship between companies and their staff motivates workers to work hard to achieve their objectives. With benefits from making employees satisfied, businesses would be more profitable and gain their goodwill.
In conclusion, successful communication in the workplace is crucial for a thriving business. However, I believe that the happiness of employees is the priority that companies should focus on before other factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90421455939 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19347682186 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8299998198 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212035031383 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742650100668 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694023578684 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158707957596 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922114105835 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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