Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their families?
In today's world, families are getting separated because of the emergence of modernization and urbanization. Relatives could hardly get a chance for get-togethers in the families. The essay will talk about the possible reasons for a modern standard of living and its effects on society.
There are a certain number of reasons that justify individuals cannot spend more time with their families. To being with, due to the highly competitive world, each of us is allowed to devote more time towards our career which is significantly important to survive in this world. For example, a person who works in a multinational company has to upgrade themselves by learning different skills to save their jobs and get good promotions to enlighten their careers and to earn a better salary. Secondly, youngsters are forced to come to metropolitan areas from suburbs to acquire a decent education or job. Consequently, young adults barely have an opportunity to be at home with their families. Thirdly, people have only small leisure time left to enjoy themselves after completing their crucial activities for the day. For instance, 24 hours a day, a person gets only less than 3 hours to enjoy their hobbies in their free time which could be anything like playing sports, singing, dancing, working out, meeting with friends and many more unlike spending time with their families.
With all the possible reasons explained above, it entails some of the detrimental effects. Chiefly, the mental health and the family unity get imbalanced. Given the fact that people spend a considerable amount of time apart from their relatives, a lack of interaction and communication might yield a feeling of constant isolation and loneliness which in turn damages a person's mind. Apart from this, family members' bonds start deteriorating. While having only an annual meeting like a traditional dinner will replace the potential of everyday connection.
To conclude, the modern way of living impedes the house to be close-knit. While families are deprived of a profound amount of time with their close ones in the world, there are ramifications that tend to complicate households to be united.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, apart from, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19373219373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84102301258 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595441595442 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.512176002 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.235294118 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323884232964 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891948556536 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651215440671 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15783674482 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847538096388 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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