Older people are waiting to be retired but when they get retired they feel unhappy. Why this is the case? What can be done to solve this problem?
Senior citizens have an avid aspiration to retire. However, they feel great sorrow after becoming retired. What gives birth to this? What are feasible solutions?
There are a number of factors being responsible for retirees' lack of a sense of satisfaction after they stop working. A chief cause of this situation is probably stem from a high degree of physical impairments which is prevalent in their age. Diseases such as high blood pressure, arthritis and diabetes observed rampantly among the old can act as a catalyst for them to not only suffer from pain and medical abstinence, but struggle with the troubles and the expenses of treatments. Additionally, retirees used to work and socialize with their colleagues on a regular basis. However, due to the separation from their work environment, friends and coworkers, they do not adequately have social relationships after retirement. Accordingly, they would feel isolated and abandoned.
There are a few remedies to take to enhance their level of contentment. A practical measure might be to provide them sufficient medical cares in order to increase their wellbeing. For instance, an efficient health insurance that effectively cover the considerable amount of treatments expenses, can support them to be relief in utilizing any types of medical or wellbeing services. A secondary motive would be that to establish retirements communities that provide amenities and socialization opportunities for retired people. Being join in such associations, older individual can keep their peers company, receive proper services and fill their times. Therefore, retirees will sustain a joyful life in the event of they are reassured of receiving ample medical cares as well as have a feeling of belonging to a community.
In conclusion, the elderly's common health issues as well as sense of isolation are possible reasons of the lack of happiness in retire people. Inclusive health care services combined with membership in retirement communities can alleviate this complication to a great extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41379310345 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02146551195 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601880877743 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.27516429 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9444444444 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243691531596 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735048301184 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519582793888 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143949323201 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217779244076 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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