ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the present scenario, many nations in the world are suffering from environmental,population as well as as educational adversities. However,the continution of these problems in coming future will badly impact the human race but, with indepth monitoring and survillence , this situation can be competely altered. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the potential problems that countries may encounter in the next decade and also discuss the corrective measures that can be used to prevent these problems from arising .
To embark on, there are numerous problems that nations may face in next ten years. Firstly, because of overpopulation, the traffic problem increases with a great pace, as, more motorbikes, cars and other autmobiles not only risk the life of people but also create abundant smoke, which eventually leads to pollution. For example- in some cities the air pollution index rate is too high , just because they are densely populated ,which further creating respiratory problems in people. Secondly, everyday many new diseases are evolving ,which adversely impacting the human life. For instance- Coronavirus , a new virus of animal origin have frightened everybody in the world. Moreover, many other new viral forms are origining and chances will doubled if not controled today.
To get rid of these problems in upcoming future ,there are certain strategies that can be made. On the one hand, government can control the high rate of population by developing strict rules of not having two children in one family, which certainly decrease the traffic as well as pollution problem ,as the commodities and vehicles used by people will get reduced. On the other hand, new techniques in the medicine can eventually progress the medical field and tackling with the diseases can become easy.
To conclude, today the problems such as population, traffic, pollution , medical problems which adveresly affecting the nations worldwide , but, with curative measures and wider outlook of authorities to tackle the problems can be fruitful and this situation can be prevented in coming future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41768292683 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95009861873 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9498574345 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.692307692 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22169009592 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776998078504 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503197106917 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137884644125 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050140475746 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.