Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Disposable plastic has far more consequences on the environment than we realise. Plastic items like bags,
bottles and packaging materials are adversely affecting our planet. In this essay, I will discuss the
damage it causes to the environment and different measures that can be taken by us and our government to
solve this problem.
One of the major concerns is the non-biodegradable waste which is lying around everywhere. Because of this,
every monsoon, there is an issue with drain blockage, and water logging in the city. The second major concern is
air pollution caused by the burning of garbage consisting of plastic litter. This emits toxic gases into the air and
is harmful to all living beings.
There are many steps that the government and individuals can take to resolve this crisis. The government could ban the production of the non-recyclable category of plastic. Monitoring the disposal of plastic material in a
controlled and safe manner away from cities. We as an individual can also play our part by being mindful of the
waste we are producing daily. For example, one can avoid purchasing pre-packaged dry ingredients like
pulses, rice, etc, and rather buy them loose from the grocery. If buying a certain plastic item is unavoidable,
try reusing it later at home, for other things. Always carry a fabric shopping bag while going out.
In this essay, I discussed how plastic items are damaging the environment, and what steps our government and us,
ourselves can take to resolve it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.132 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79928276528 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5850200894 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347505136283 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100414700702 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064531491398 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946344408095 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784582197288 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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