At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
A successful economy is run by the collaboration of energetic youth and experienced elderly people. In recent years, the young generation outnumbers senior citizens in some nations across the world. This change has both merits and demerits which I will cite in this essay.
On one hand, the development and prosperity of a nation are dependent on its youths as they are responsible for running the country's economy. This generation is not only energetic and intellectual but also tries to implement new ideas which are beneficial for the country's well-being and prosperity. Moreover, financial experts claim that a nation can be developed if it has a higher youth class compared to mature ones. Thus, immigration in a country such as Canada has increased as they have a higher senior citizens ratio compared to youths. Henceforth, it’s indispensable to have youths for the development of a nation.
However, on the other hand, elderly people hold more life experience which is vital for running a country's administration. Their role in imparting the age-old wisdom as well as passing on the country's culture and tradition is humongous. Although the greying population plays a significant role in teaching the youths from their lifelong learnings, their experience would prove futile if the country lacks a young population. Thus, it is acceptable to have a comparatively less elderly class than younger ones.
To conclude, even if the mature class is pre-eminent for delivering the life lessons which are very important for administering a country, its implementation is not possible without the young generation. Thus, having relatively larger youths than older people is always beneficial for a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
... increased as they have a higher senior citizens ratio compared to youths Henceforth its...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21771217712 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95778958337 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527675276753 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 271.0 20.2975951904 1335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1414.0 106.682146367 1325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 271.0 20.7667163134 1305% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 95.0 7.06120827912 1345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133143416934 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133143416934 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089674645675 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180013372286 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 138.7 13.0946893788 1059% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -212.05 50.2224549098 -422% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 110.2 11.3001002004 975% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.48 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.21 8.58950901804 247% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 66.0 9.78957915832 674% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 110.4 10.1190380762 1091% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 111.0 10.7795591182 1030% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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