Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Community service or volunteering in a social event to aid the needy class of society is pivotal for the well-being of our world as a whole. A part of the population considers social service as vital subjects to be learned by teenagers in their alma-mater. I completely agree with this notion and will cite its reasons in this essay.
Students learn a plethora of subjects which aids them in learning significant lessons for life. For instance, language imbibes the base of communication, mathematics aids in learning numbers, while physical education lays a foundation of fitness in life. Along with these subjects, community service should be considered a mandatory subject as it not only develops a sense of social responsibility but also aids them to learn new skills like leadership and interpersonal communication. Thus, volunteering in charity event improves children's soft skills cannot be developed by classroom teachings.
Moreover, students learn new life-long teachings while interacting with the destitute class of society through their experiences. For example, high-school pupils can acquire teaching experience while endowing their wisdom to underprivileged children; in return, they can learn new skills like art which the destitute class often possesses. Although some parents oppose this idea of unpaid community service due to reasons such as hygiene, the traits which a student can learn through these experiences over-shadows the negative side.
To conclude, volunteering in social event plays a pivotal role in teaching new perspectives of life and significant skills which helps students in career. Hence, unpaid community service should be made mandatory for students in their high school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58778625954 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04369630128 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8371884534 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204159906871 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867265513816 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712144909351 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138843309515 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299135318311 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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