Question: Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. Nevertheless, some may adamantly believe that encouraging kids to allocate most of their time to play games, others will think that such actions will have negative impacts as well. This essay will elaborate both views.
To start with, the majority of individuals would agree with the notion that playing games can be beneficial, especially in their childhood. First and foremost, in order to stay physically and mentally fit, children are usually advised to do a variety of physical activities on a regular basis. According to a recent study published in the New England Journal of medicine in 2018, children who spend more than ten hours weekly exercising either indoor or outdoor tend to grow faster and become less vulnerable to acquiring diseases. This is because the youngsters playing games like running and jumping will have a stronger immune system, and will gain few centimeters more than their peers who spend less time practicing. In addition to staying healthy and in a good shape, playing sports early can shape one`s future. In other words, most of the famous athletes nowadays started practicing sports at the age of six which allow them to become professionals. For instance, Rafael Nadal, the famous tennis champion, began his journey in the sports world earlier as six years old, he played different games until he realized that tennis is his passion. If he didn`t start earlier, he wouldn`t have become the hero we know today.
On the other hand, exercising too much can sometimes be detrimental. To begin with, by spending most of their time playing, children will not have sufficient period for studying. Consequently, children who study less tend to get lower grades in school, which will affect their performance and their overall grading as well. Moreover, injuries incidences are likely to be higher among over-active kids. Take my brother as an example, he suffered from multiple fractures during his boyhood while doing Karate. As a result, his absence during elementary school increased significantly and could not compensate what he missed and ended up with very low grades. Long story short, it is advisable to always balance between practicing and relaxing in order to avoid any harms.
In conclusion, however playing sports longer periods improves the quality of life and the career pathway of youngsters, failure to manage between practicing and resting could lead to severe hazards such as bad performance in school and may accidently increase the risk of injuries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1065, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...his journey in the sports world earlier as six years old, he played different game...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18139534884 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67975604905 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7725504892 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.263157895 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6315789474 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8947368421 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102593089876 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305116280816 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360415526392 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594064757672 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023968664341 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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