Several languages die every year. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion.
As a result of globalization, numerous languages are disappearing each year. While some argue this phenomenon boosts harmony and understanding between individuals, in my view, it has an adverse effect on local cultures.
On the one hand, advocates of fewer languages highlight that having common language plays a vital role in an effective communication and understanding. It means that the less diversity in the languages around the world, the fewer barriers individuals will face in communicating with each other. For example, the spread of English as Internet language has brought people together regardless of where they originally come from. As a result of easy communication, people would be able to better understand each other’s meaning and fewer conflicts will arise among them. In this situation, peace and understanding will be promoted among the nations.
On the other hand, the opposite group, including me, believe that the extinction of languages can be more detrimental. In fact, the language we speak can be viewed as a powerful tool which has been used to convey our traditions and culture from our ancestors. Therefore, if a society’s language becomes extinct, all the beliefs and the behaviors characterizing that nation will also die out in the long run. In this way, future generations are highly likely to have an indifferent outlook toward their country’s destiny, as they will not be well-informed about the value of their country’s history and identity.
In conclusion, although fewer languages can bring some benefits to people, I believe that its devastating effect on our cultural identity could not be neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...some benefits to people, I believe that its devastating effect on our cultural iden...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ltural identity could not be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43846153846 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18381632487 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7690794944 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231210144093 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873454015703 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349236165017 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138962970701 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521873888779 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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