In some areas of the US, a «curfew» is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
Generally, the curfew is imposed to control some violent activities, riots or to prevent anti-social events, which can disturb the peace of society or some area of city, state or nation. In such situation preventing teenagers to roam around without supervision to their elders may create danger to teenagers life. I fully agree with the notion of belief and this essay will advocate my opinion.
On the one hand, There is no doubt that it is hard to keep young blood under controll in such situation because adolescences are more curious about the circumstances around them, and will not loose even a single change to move out of the house to experience such situation. Secondly, teenagers do not like to be supervised about their night life such as their choice of disco theque, or their friends home address where they used to party or study. This ban on children, instills feeling of dependent regarding their decision to move around in night.
On the other hand, this temporary enforcement of low will assure the safety and security of teenagers and their family members. Secondly, night traveling accompanied by elder will prevent teenagers to do some nasty thing like indulge in drink and drive activity . This will eventually make them reach their destination safely. Moreover, under some critical situation the wisdom of elder people will take best decision for them shelve to get safe shelter and will fully co-operate with government officials and their instructions.
To sumup, the temporary curfew are enforced to confirm the safety and security of citizen. As a resposible citizen, it is one's resposibility to observe such enforcement including teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17279411765 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69113876595 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1475613323 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153868125538 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565252264398 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337660750765 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871358890135 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427733966697 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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