Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every nation must keep its citizens well fed throughout their lifetime. While a large proportion of food products are produced within the country, some are imported. According to few people, a country should be self-sufficient in feeding its masses while showing minimal dependence on other countries. I strongly agree with this notion and the contributing factors are explained further.
The most important factor behind a country’s prosperity is its self-sufficiency to feed its population at all times because, whenever there is a dispute between the two nations the trade and relation are strained. This further leads to disruptions in supply chain. As a result, the supplier takes advantage of the situation and exploits the buyer in terms of higher price and lower quality and dents the growth of business. This phenomenon was evident in World War 2 wherein the smaller countries ran out of their food grains while most of the supplying nation were busy stocking supplies for their armed forces.
Apart from the supplies and dependence, imports from other countries also cause trade deficit in long run, for the buying partner. A substantial part of the transaction value comprises of the basic cost and is paid to the seller with some taxes, which are applicable in his country of origin. Consequently, the financial reserves of the buying nation deplete very quickly and leaves a little or nothing for its own development. On the contrary, if the essential items are produced and consumed within the country itself, it provides jobs to a larger group of people and brings all-around prosperity.
Thus, it should be understood by the particular country that self-reliance is more important than to become overly dependent for essential needs; however, a few non-essential products can be imported from other nations. I believe this will keep both the sides balanced and harmonious.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25657894737 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.869145249 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0496494439 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206791719129 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594069885225 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357258716285 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116858118156 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190410084933 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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