Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
There is a view that while buying anything, the cost should be the main component to be considered. In my opinion, although it is crucial to validate the value of an item before making a purchase, however, the quality and durability of products should also be taken into consideration.
To begin with, it is essential to acknowledge that paying an unnecessary amount for the random thing is not a sound approach. This is because many people buy expensive accessories that they do not even use, just for the sake of social status. For instance, in the modern era, it has become quite trendy buying high-priced electronic gadgets, such as mobile phones. As a result, an inclination of the use and throw culture is on the peak. Not only this has a detrimental impact on an individual's financial condition, but it also has untoward repercussions to the environment.
However, i believe that the stability and usefulness of the products are the factors that also play a major role in purchasing. With regard to the quality, high-price does not guarantee that the product is going to last long. As for the latter, buying low-priced things but useless can have diverse impacts on an individual's life, such as a huge pile of accumulated junk and waste of hard-earned money. To cite an example, youngsters these days often seen spending a large amount of their income on expensive technological devices, which they do not even need. This lifestyle puts them into financial crises.
In conclusion, while it is true that paying the unnecessary bill for anything is a negative approach hence the cost should be determined, however, needs and quality of products are also significant factors that must be analyzed before paying a huge chunk of currencies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...t only this has a detrimental impact on an individuals financial condition, but it also has un...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ssions to the environment. However, i believe that the stability and usefulne...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... useless can have diverse impacts on an individuals life, such as a huge pile of accumulate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9795221843 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88511195325 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.877133945 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114417080018 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422849431428 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308728381396 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629848721842 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048061564228 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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