Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film start, musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? What other jobs should be paid highly?
Entertainment industry, one of the richest industry in the world. Many people believe that the worker of this field for example:- film stars, musician or sports stars earns a large sum of money. In my opinion, I am totally agreed with this argument that their pay rates are higher than anyone. I also think that essential service worker should be paid highly compare to them.
To begin with, entertainment is one of the major component of our life. It help us to pass our spare time and to spend some quality of hours with our friends and families while watching movies or sports game occasionally. Distribution of money is all depends on your popularity. If you're famous than anyone else, you will get more money than others. These stars are very well overpaid. they charge millions sometime just to have little appearance in movie or in advertisement. Whereas, some deserving people not get enough to survive. In addition to it, a lot of time their jobs are not hardworking, they got stuntman to the stunts on their behalf and for singer get autotune just to make there voice soulful.
On the other hand, I suppose that essential service workers need to get more money in salary. workers such as :- doctors, police officer who usually serve for public. They ensure for safety of everyone around them. Moreover, we need to increase wages of teachers also, they are the pillars of our society. They are the one who teach youth and children's about the difference between what is right and what is wrong. The one who teach us the fundamental rules of life and the one who inspire us to be successful in life.
In conclusion, it seems that paying huge amount to celebrities is like wasting our resource which can be used efficiently. Government need to regulate the salary of person of this profession and need to use that resource to pay doctors, cops and teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77230769231 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53037737608 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7547119108 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.55 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178107358545 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457161759556 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484177941215 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984683763903 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788792030522 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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