Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
It this developed world, a clan of masses believes that commercial publicity of new products in the market extremely beneficial to the community while I believe that such kind of publication motivates people to buy items which in fact they do not need in their daily life. The reasons for the same are illustrated below with strong examples.
To begin with, the prime reason behind this trend is a huge discount offer that many whole-seller and manufacturer devoting their customer to attract them and force them to buy it. Besides this, it is a common scenario that human being always looks into saving their money and to make it possible, they normally preferred to buy the product with some exceptional offers. moreover, the celebrities who perform as the main character in such an advertisement plays a vital role to consume new products and influence people to buy it without any hesitation. for example, In India, in the telecom sector, a private firm had acquired millions of new customer just in two years by giving them internet and much entertaining application to use for free and on the next year, they charged for the same and people can not resist it as it becomes necessary for them to use.
however, many people believe that the best idea to know about any new products is only an imperative publication that gives them proper information about the content that used to manufacture it. therefore, they suggest watching the bulletin first before the purchase of any product. for instance, any health product company always shows the practice of any medical item to the community to use it safely.
In conclusion, Indeed it is mandatory for people to know bout the new item that arrives in the market. The government should make a regulation to show a clear difference between the good one and an ordinary one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87820512821 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64695469644 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9099977273 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144974533312 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540956206067 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403715927452 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846576708718 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352412587323 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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