Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The advertising world has never been as flourished as it is in this decade where the whole world just functions on the basis of the product's varied advertisement. Purists have been always very vocal about the order and convenience advertisements bring to our lives on the other hand controversies do bring the same aspect of advertisement down by showing the mirror to the society which ends up hoarding things just because advertisements make them feel inadequate. This essay tries to subtly argue about both sides of the coin and let the reader decide on their own.
I agree that there have been numerous occasions where I feel compelled to buy things just because it gives me instant gratification and brings me happiness. On the other hand, no denial everyone is struggling in their lives these days due to work or other pressures so these advertisements give an emotional upper hand when we end up buying stuff even if we don't need living us feeling adequate and powerful.
Agree that advertisement does end up letting us shell out more than we really need but there is also no escape from the fact that these take consumers to the world of choices and information which was never as readily available as it's now. No matter where you are in the world, you are always well informed with all the options available so to aid you with the right choices. On the other hand, advertising also leads to a better valuation of the products where information of all the products are out in the market space among everyone making everyone aware of the valuation system.
Overall, I feel both the aspect of advertisement weigh equally in both cases as it simply doesn't scale enough for one side of the story only. These are two sides of the coin and consumer should be able to think enough before making any decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... when we end up buying stuff even if we dont need living us feeling adequate and pow...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...eigh equally in both cases as it simply doesnt scale enough for one side of the story ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.738170347 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62872386814 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.835805 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.2 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253795938643 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870765070658 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551227126392 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13896462631 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510992387048 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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