Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
Many youngsters like to buy new products seeing the television or flyers or newspapers. These kids have in mind that these items increase the standard of living. I would like to vote against advertisement. Not all items that are advertised is useful and not all the useful things are advertised. It is completely possible to increase the sales of a product by maintaining high quality.
My Daddy is an electronic lover. whenever new product reaches market, he will be the first person to try out. Whereas my brother is a book fan. He loves reading mystery and crime novels. One side my Father piles up electronic item and on other hand my sibling stack up the shelves with large volume of books. Me and my mother will end up clearing the items by donating the books and advertising the electronic items for the second hand sale.
To be frank we have lost money by buying things which is actually not necessary. I would like to special mention about a Ipod which my pappa got. Cost of the Ipod at the time of release was $500 whereas within a year the product price dropped to $200. My sincere advise is to buy only the items which is necessary and do not get engrossed with the advertisement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whenever
...ty. My Daddy is an electronic lover. whenever new product reaches market, he will be ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he will be the first person to try out. Whereas my brother is a book fan. He loves read...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... I would like to special mention about a Ipod which my pappa got. Cost of the Ip...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55813953488 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54600079829 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0352385633 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3333333333 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129387863588 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396274903544 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374195446734 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872881226531 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327654079319 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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