Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It has been observed that advertising impacts on the buying behavior of consumers. At times it encourages users to buy things that are irrelevant for them whereas in few cases it seems helpful in letting us know about the usefulness of new products that may improve our lives. In my opinion, advertisements are a good source of getting an idea on whats going on in market and how it is going to impact our lives in a positive way.
You can see this common these days that a company is making multiple variants of one products instead of introducing new products. To cater ever changing behaviors of customers, companies are either introducing new products or changing/modifying their existing products to meet customer’s requirements. For instance, you can get dish washing liquids of a same company with different additives just to lure the customers based on their needs. So it is good to know before buying a product that wither this will serve the purpose or not.
Comparative analysis of products is another reason that helps a consumer to make the best buy. Advertisements of different companies for same product gives an idea to customers to choose the best in low or comparative price. For instance, being a consumer, if I have to buy drinking water of two international brands, their advertisement will help me choosing by analyzing their features. It will save my time while I am doing my grocery.
To recapitulate, I must say that advertising a product is always useful for both companies and consumers. It depends on buyer if he wants to open his pockets for companies or spend it wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...are a good source of getting an idea on whats going on in market and how it is going ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...and how it is going to impact our lives in a positive way. You can see this common these days th...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one product', 'a product', or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: one product; a product; products
... company is making multiple variants of one products instead of introducing new products. To...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...nstance, being a consumer, if I have to buy drinking water of two international bra...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to choose' or 'choose'.
Suggestion: to choose; choose
...rands, their advertisement will help me choosing by analyzing their features. It will sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, whereas, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87226277372 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02837250232 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3625580789 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248879706566 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829611533005 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566748417072 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142976631813 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051193326083 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.