It has been argued that advertising is one of the main factors that help in raising the selling rates markedly, others believe that it is an old-fashioned way to convince them to buy a product. This essay will discuss both sides and completely agree with the first view.
Some people believe that advertisement is one of the best ways to persuade people to buy a product. Adds are designed to target a specific group of the society who are need this type of goods. In other words, it shows the benefits of the item they want to sell, therefore, they convince that group of people to buy it. For example, many companies in Saudi Arabia have been advertising their commodities and they have been experiencing a sharp increase in their selling rates. In my opinion, I believe that advertising has an impact on our brains that trigger the desire to buy those items even if we do not need them. Thus, advertisement is entirely necessary in which it has influence in buying rates.
On the other hand, some people consider advertising useless as it is so common. The reason for this may rely on that people got used to see adds and as a result they no longer impressed by it because it is an old-fashioned method. However, this claim can be contradict easily by the fact that there are numerous number of ideas for advertisement that are generated every year. For example, the creative adds for companies like Apple and Samsung urge people to buy a new phone even if they do not need it.
In conclusion, although some people believe that advertising plays an important role in convincing people to buy a product, others think that it is not necessary as a result of their commonness. In my opinion, I completely agree that adds can highly persuade people to buy things due to its influence on our brains.
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language 67
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world 51
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... target a specific group of the society who are need this type of goods. In other words...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r hand, some people consider advertising useless as it is so common. The reason f...
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Line 7, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngs due to its influence on our brains.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as for, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.653125 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64230715652 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49375 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2777769329 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309626921187 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119734505163 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892026279515 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196387308844 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052935255472 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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