SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE BEST WAY TO IMPROVE PUBLIC HEALTH IS BY INCREASING THE NUMBER OF SPORTS FACILITIES. OTHERS, HOWEVER, SAY THAT THIS WOULD HAVE LITTLE EFFECT ON PUBLIC HEALTH AND THAT OTHER MEASURES ARE REQUIRED.
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
In recent time, the public health is the soaring concern that needs to be accounted. Some people believe that increasing sports facilities will help while others think that it has little impact. this essay will delve into both of these view and followed by the conclusion.
On the one hand, increase in sports facility will allow people to indulge more into physical activities and eventually improve the health. Firstly, such sports facilities will attract more people to do or play their favourite sports like swimming, playing badminton, jogging. these sports requires the good amount of exercise , thus will improve the overall health of individual. To illustrate this, for diabetic and obese people, the walking is best exercise to improve their health and sports center is the ideal way to provide such environment to these people. Moreover, recent survey was carried out about overall health of individuals and found that person doing regular exercise are more fit, active and happy in their life than others.
On the other hand, few people says that building such sports centers are waste of time , money and will not improve the public health. To begin with, they believe that today people do have sufficient time to attend sports facility due to hectic schedule. So, these centers are of no use. Rather to build such center if government build more parks with trees will benefit more to the society and citizens. As, trees are helpful to purify the environment , will help to reduce the noise pollution and also reduce the temperature of surroundings.
To sum up, improvement of public health is the responsibility of both government and individuals. So,the combine efforts will results desire outcome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, while, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17562724014 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4860255271 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2913831427 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262899232744 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941380268225 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077664286459 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167693489348 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404934191822 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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