Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people s lives Do you agree

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...portance of our appearance is undeniable . While others have always argued about t...
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...mpact that fashion put on human ‘s lives , in this essay , I will discuss clearly ...
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...on put on human ‘s lives , in this essay , I will discuss clearly about the pivota...
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...on that I totally agree that it has had an significant changes in the way people l...
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...ly agree that it has had an significant changes in the way people live. First and fore...
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...the way people live. First and foremost , I suppose fashion betters the way peopl...
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...betters the way people thinking about us . Doubtlessly wearing or putting on court...
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...ing on courteous outfits would probably makes us being in other’s good books . People...
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...bly makes us being in other’s good books . People now tend to count on to cooperat...
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...ality to influence others. Nevertheless , the price of clothes is also highly so...
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...ity to influence others. Nevertheless , the price of clothes is also highly soug...
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...ly sought after by all the whole society . With an enough earning to meet ends nee...
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...e costs would be prohibitively expensive . In the modern world which provides us a...
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...ch provides us an abundance of selection , it is not difficult to find the outfits...
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...ashionable but not cost an arm and a leg . In conclusion , the field of fashion...
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...ionable but not cost an arm and a leg . In conclusion , the field of fashion imm...
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...cost an arm and a leg . In conclusion , the field of fashion immensely play a h...
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...n ‘s lives on the grounds of its wonders . Having said that , I suppose this indus...
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...rounds of its wonders . Having said that , I suppose this industry would probably ...
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...-coming issue both now and in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, i suppose, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81034482759 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62566576464 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616379310345 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4458577194 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159137460492 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553984751805 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065228627342 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949996726242 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545092881231 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.