Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
It is an undeniable fact that wealth is quite important in one’s life and there are many who spend their lives in the pursuit of wealth. However, there are others who believe that being happy is does not mean that one has to chase materialistic things but happiness can be achieved through other things besides wealth.
The most compelling reason for people to believe that having a ton of money can solve all problems is due the fact that everything is commoditized. Every human need or want is productized and available commercially these days. In addition, owning certain things in life is considered as mark of being successful. Although one may really need it or not, owning fast cars, expensive mansions and indulging in exotic food has been on everybody’s bucket list and money servers the means to achieve such ends creating a notion of psychological superiority.
On the other hand, there are individuals who seek pleasure by associating themselves with a purpose or belonging towards their families, community or even humanitarian causes. Despite of earning less money compared to others, some individuals feel quite happy when bonding with spouse, children or parents. To cite an example, individuals who work in the military to protect their nations. Even though they are not paid as much, they are still willing to sacrifice their lives to protect their motherland. Human emotion of patriotism and sense of belonging are other things apart from money that add a value to individual lives in their pursuit of happiness.
To conclude with, although an individual’s survival would be in question without sufficient money, there are other things like philanthropy or family bonding that could also bring joy and contentment to one’s life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, really, so, still, apart from, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79201441895 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7409958351 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223683931115 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737972742639 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696081916058 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128728403406 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365767610363 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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