Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some that there is no point in visiting cinemas to watch movies as they watch movies at home by using their phones or computers. However, it is thoughts by others that if someone wants to enjoy watching a movie this person should definitely visit the cinema.
There are a number of reasons why some people do not like cinemas and prefer to watch movies at home by using their gadgets. Firstly, they say that tickets are, usually, quite expensive and they cannot afford to purchase them. In addition, they are sure that visiting a cinema is squandering their money. Many people prefer to watch movies with their family members and it means that they should buy several tickets for all of them which is not economically profitable. Secondly, some people have never been interested in visiting cinemas as they do not like crowded places. They consider that it is, in general, very noisy in cinemas so it may be annoying and disruptive. Furthermore, they have mentioned that it almost always smells bad in cinemas because some people drink alcohol while watching others eat some unusual food such as dried fish.
Others think that there are more advantages of watching movies in cinemas that at home. Firstly, they say that cinemas, in general, have special audio systems which make watching movies there enjoyable. Secondly, they enjoy watching movies in cinemas because of enormous, perfect, screens. Lastly, they say that on the internet people may watch just old movies new ones legally can be seen just in cinemas and nowhere else.
In conclusion, watching movies in cinemas has almost always been more popular than at home. Massive screens and great sound effects make watching enjoyable that is why many people prefer to watch a movie in the cinema rather than at home.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91447368421 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32279703813 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496710526316 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0440278811 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170774597717 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782480988006 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352540516758 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121378493489 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032971184727 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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