Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn to occupy themselves on their own.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Parents want their children to reach their full potential and to that end they try to motivate them to try their hands on so many activities be it structured or not. Many people believe that parents should inspire their children to partake in organized group activities while some are of the opinion that children should learn to keep themselves busy. In this essay, I will explore the two views and then I will give my opinion.
Those who believe that parents should inspire their children to partake in organized group activities are of the opinion that the structure in place helps children have a wholesome learning experience because the activities are intentional. In other words, group activities such as debates build confidence, articulation, and boosts self-esteem. They are also of the opinion that the structure enforces civility and reduces the instances of bullying and hurt associated with learning.
On the other hand, those who are of the opinion that children should learn to keep themselves busy believe that structure stifles creativity. To illustrate, it is often though that a child who has a talent for drawing and painting could lose part of his creativity if he compelled to do his art to meet a fixed requirement. They also say that children should be able to explore activities as they please so that they end up choosing and doing what they truly enjoy.
To conclude, I believe that both views have valid opinions and my opinion is that children, regardless of whether they learn in organized groups activities or learn on their own, will still hit their potential provided that have supportive parents who will listen to their needs and act on them when necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, then, while, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00352112676 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64202555775 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8223315149 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.1 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435260457747 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170560172463 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128306766518 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278700146908 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09183796077 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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