Some people think that illegal internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on the artist. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Even though a considerable number of people are of the view that online downloads that are not legalized have a deteriorating impact on the music industry, others purport that such maneuvers have no significant effect on the artists. However, I believe that illegal downloads on the internet do influence the artists and the industry to some extent.
To begin with, some individuals side with the view that illegal internet downloads have no repercussions on the musicians and the singers as they believe that these downloads are of poor quality and does not provide satisfaction to the listeners and the viewers. Moreover, a recent poll in England depicted that only a mere 10 percent listeners obtained music from unethical sources because of the poor acoustics. This shows that the music industry is hardly affected from unauthorized downloads.
Conversely, others hold the view that illegal downloads do have damaging effects on the music industry and I agree with this.Firstly, an artist and the people associated with the music works extremely hard to perfect a tune, rythym and the notes. It takes months of practice and dedication to synchronize a piece of music and not to mention the vast amount of funds required to achieve this. Also, all this hard work is paid back directly in the form of monetary gain through the online downloads as the artist gets an incentive from the success of the music which is measured by the total downloads from legal sources on the internet. Therefore, when people download the music illegally , it steals the opportunity from the musicians and the artists involved to reap profit from it. Consequently affecting the music industry and summing to huge financial losses along with belittling the individuals involved. T- series, for example, which is a huge distributor of Indian music, suffered a massive loss in the year 2018 due to illegal downloads.
In summary, while people may differ in their opinions, I believe that the music industry and the artist does bear the consequences of illegal internet downloads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13353115727 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7647830058 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513353115727 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1202435413 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.166666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332766283072 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123699530552 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967045549427 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229032758491 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101317017325 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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