Some people think it is better for people to change their careers at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Although many people prefer to work in the same field throughout their life, others argue that switching jobs to another stream at least once is good for them. In my point of view, I completely disagree with this notion. Through this essay, I will explain why it is important to stay in the same career and how this will assist individuals to make good professional and personal connections at the workplace.
To begin with, The primary reason that I believe that is a strong connection with the other workers at the job site. if a person works in the same career for a longer period of time such as in restaurants, and the health care system. As a result, he will be able to make good bonding between their seniors and juniors. In addition, whether he is working in a junior position team member, for instance. With the passage of time, he will gain experience and a senior position at the same place as Supervisor. Therefore, working in the same organization or field is highly beneficial for professional development.
Furthermore, work stability is another factor that is highly essential to stay tough in the same job rather than changing jobs. A survey was conducted by Tim Horton's restaurant in Canada and concluded that employees who were working for the last 3 to 4 years were able to complete all tasks with more accuracy than the newcomers. Even though newly hired staff also get trained still they are not confident as compared to experienced staff. Hence, there is 100 percent job stability and security seen in well-trained and old workers than others. Due to all factors discussed in the above paragraphs, I extremely agree that individuals do not need to change their jobs or career.
In conclusion, it is crystal clear from the above explanation and examples that working for the long time period in the same stream provides, personal and professional development, job safety, and security with self-esteem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...with the other workers at the job site. if a person works in the same career for a...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...n works in the same career for a longer period of time such as in restaurants, and the health ...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with more accuracy than the newcomers. Even though newly hired staff also get trained stil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89634146341 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75722376084 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567073170732 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6495489588 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.066666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24512963013 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774932623132 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068887051148 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139713799806 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682720697955 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.